In recent years, sports stars have become increasingly famous and wealthy. For some this is a benefit, raising the profit of sports, but for others, it is a negative influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days athletes' fame has proliferated and

also

they are much wealthier than in the past. Partly being in

such

high status is beneficial, as it helps with getting more attention on the sport as well, but for others may have some disadvantages because they feel some threat to their privacy. I am

strongly

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of the opinion that

this

phenomenon is positive

overall

, so in order to be more explicit, consider both views.

To begin

with, sports persons especially the most famous ones, are role models for youngsters,

thus

they should be apparent in society as successful people so that, parents would be willing to encourage their offspring to the sports fields. For those children themselves, having a suitable ambitious, happy, and rich hero is essential to lead them to the right way toward success.

On the other hand

, those athletes may feel they have less space to live their own life, as they should be always flawless and perfect like a super

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.

However

, human beings even the most qualified ones have some dark shades with them, and well-known people sometimes are worried to reveal those.

Although

they may miss ordinary life, they had chosen the opposite path previously. Having considered two perspectives, I am convinced that the stardom of sports bodies not only is not a negative thing but hugely positive in many aspects of which society,

as well as

themselves, are beneficiaries.

Although

, as I mentioned some sportsmen and sportswomen may miss some aspects of unknown life, the affluence brought about by fame can make up for

this

feeling!