You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: - explain your situation - describe your problems - tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I got hired as a

Project

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Manager in your organization. I have to join next week in the office as per my joining letter, but I am worried that I would not be able to join on that date. In my current office, I'll complete my notice period by the mid of the next week but one of my projects is not complete yet and I have to complete it before I leave that company. Actually, no one else knows about that

project

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and I am the only one who is dealing with that

project

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and its client. So, that

project

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needs my time and my presence. I would request you to please extend my joining date to 2 weeks from now so that I can complete my

last

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running

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successfully and join your office with much more positive feedback. Thank you in advance, looking forward to your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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