The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
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The given charts reveal the report of the survey on why adults decide to continue their studies and how tuition should be funded.
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, it can be seen that the highest reason why people choose to study is because of interest in the subject,
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the highest proportion of funding is from individuals. To start with, the top reasons people want to pursue their education are
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in the subject and to gain a qualification, which shows at 40% and 38% respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of the survey for reasons of helpful for current jobs, to improve prospects and promotion, and enjoy learning/studying are in the range between 22% and 20%. As the figure of being able to change jobs and to meet people only report at above 15% each. As the survey of education cost reveals that individuals are the highest proportion in
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case, which show
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35% of the education fees should be funded by the employer and 25% by the taxpayer.
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