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The table below shows the production of carbon dioxide in five different countries in 2006.

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The given table illustrates the Carbon-dioxide (Co2)
emissions
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 per
person
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 in five countries, namely - China,the
USA
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, Russia India and Japan between 2005 and 2006. The percentage of incline and decline in Carbon-dioxide
emissions
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 from 2005 to 2006 is
also
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 mentioned in the chart. It is clear from
table
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the table
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 that the developed countries had
a high
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high emissions
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emissions
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 of Carbon-dioxide per
person
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. The
USA
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 produced the highest amount of Co2
emissions
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 which is 19.8
million
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tonnes
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 of Co2 per
person
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, Russia stood at the second highest and Japan was the third highest at 12.1 and 9.8
million
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tonnes
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person
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 respectively. China produced 4.6
million
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tonnes
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 of Co2 per
person
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, which was 14
million
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tonnes
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. As far as the total Co2
emissions
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is
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 concerned, the
USA
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 remained the highest producer of Co2 and produced 5878
million
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tonnes
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Co2
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of Co2
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 in 2005 Russia, India and Japan produced below 1500
million
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tonnes
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 of Co2. In just a period of one year, China replaced the
USA
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 in Co2
emissions
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, with an increase of 11% compared to the year 2005. The
USA
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 is the only country where there was a decline of 2% in Co2
emissions
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 from 2005 to 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emissions, person, usa, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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