The table below shows the production of carbon dioxide in five different countries in 2006.

The given table illustrates the Carbon-dioxide (Co2)
emissions
per
person
in five countries, namely - China,the
USA
, Russia India and Japan between 2005 and 2006. The percentage of incline and decline in Carbon-dioxide
emissions
from 2005 to 2006 is
also
mentioned in the chart. It is clear from
table
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that the developed countries had
a high
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emissions
of Carbon-dioxide per
person
. The
USA
produced the highest amount of Co2
emissions
which is 19.8
million
tonnes
of Co2 per
person
, Russia stood at the second highest and Japan was the third highest at 12.1 and 9.8
million
tonnes
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person
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respectively. China produced 4.6
million
tonnes
of Co2 per
person
, which was 14
million
tonnes
. As far as the total Co2
emissions
is
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concerned, the
USA
remained the highest producer of Co2 and produced 5878
million
tonnes
Co2
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in 2005 Russia, India and Japan produced below 1500
million
tonnes
of Co2. In just a period of one year, China replaced the
USA
in Co2
emissions
, with an increase of 11% compared to the year 2005. The
USA
is the only country where there was a decline of 2% in Co2
emissions
from 2005 to 2006.
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