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Band 7.5

Write a letter to the library manager to apply for the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a position in your library. I have always been passionate about books and knowledge, having grown up surrounded by literature. My deep appreciation for libraries as spaces of learning and community makes me eager to contribute to your organization. For the past five years, I have worked in a library setting, where I developed strong organizational skills, assisted patrons, and managed collections. My responsibilities included
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 books, coordinating events, and providing excellent customer service.
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, I am fluent in multiple languages, which allows me to assist a diverse range of visitors effectively I am highly detail-oriented, reliable, and committed to fostering a welcoming environment for all library users. My combination of experience, communication skills, and enthusiasm for literature would make me a valuable addition to your team. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my skills align with your needs. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response. Sincerely,Eminem

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking up long sentences to improve clarity and flow.
task achievement
Ensure to include specific examples of your achievements or skills to strengthen your application.
task achievement
Your enthusiasm for libraries and literature is evident, making a strong case for your passion for the role.
coherence and cohesion
Overall structure of the letter is clear, with a logical introduction, body, and conclusion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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