There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a problem

that is

related to the

construction

site

that is

located next to my residential building. I am living in The Lucky Building which is located in Mong Kok and the

construction

site is located next to my building. The

construction

started

last

Friday and it will end in July. I understand that noise will be produced during the

construction

period,

however

, it is totally unacceptable that the worker worked until ten o'

clock

and produced a lot of noise at night. The situation is annoying as it totally affects the life of my family and other residents in the same building.

For example

, I am studying a nighttime online degree course and I could not concentrate on my learning as I was distracted by the noises.

Besides

, my son used to go to bed at nine o'

clock

as he needs to go to school at seven o'

clock

early in the morning,

however

, he has not slept well since the

construction

began and

this

affects his performance at school.

Therefore

, I would like you to communicate with the

construction

company and convey my complaint. I hope that they could shorten their working time and end their work at six o'

clock

in the evening. If the condition remains unchanged,

further

actions will be done in order to alleviate the problem. I look forward to your reply and hope that the problem could be solved as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Tommy Chan

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

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although
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Linking words
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

251 words

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There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Many people believe that a rigorous diet and intensive workout in a short spam can help achieve fitness goals, whereas others think that healthy eating and moderate exercise can provide better long-term outcomes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Question- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?