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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your e-mail as follows: Dear...,

#bookshop #members #guest #speaker #event #series #talks #people #e-mail #addresses
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to personally suggest a perfect candidate for your bookshop's stimulating event filled with various speeches from renowned speakers. To be
competely
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completely
 honest, I would like you to select a competent speaker
such
 as Mitch Albom
although
 I understand that he might be hard to invite.
However
, people will definitely line up in front of your bookstore
due to
his
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 worldwide reputation which in return will promote the image of your place.
Moreover
, I certainly believe that the most well-liked author will even increase the sales of his books
due to
 his presence, and guests will be hugely benefitted and enlightened not only from his
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 session but
also
 from his charitable events likely to be mentioned during his talk.
Therefore
, I would be eternally grateful if you take my strong recommendation of a worthy guest speaker into consideration. I look forward to hearing your final decision regarding
this
 case. Thank you for your ultimate attention to my letter. Yours faithfully, Bran
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