You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph illustrates the median
number
of commuters who are travelling Use synonyms
with
different vehicles, between 1970 and 2030. X-axis represents Change preposition
in
year
, and Y-axis reveals citizens' Add an article
the year
a year
Use synonyms
number
as millions.
Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
Overall
, car preference is estimated to peaked 9 Linking Words
million
individuals in 2030.Car and train travels Use synonyms
were
tend to increase Unnecessary verb
apply
besides
bus Linking Words
travels
. Travelling by bus shows Fix the agreement mistake
travel
slightly
decreasing trend over time and reached just below 3 Correct article usage
a slightly
million
in 2029.
Between 1970 and 1980, Use synonyms
car
travelling Correct article usage
the car
of
commuters slightly increased and after 1980 Change preposition
by
rapid
rose can be seen Correct article usage
a rapid
untill
2000. Correct your spelling
until
In addition
, Linking Words
this
period Linking Words
followed
by a decade of Add a missing verb
was followed
consistent
Change the article
a consistent
the consistent
number
of people. Use synonyms
For those
who Change preposition
Those
prefered
train for travelling gradually rose between 1970-2000 and reached 3 Correct your spelling
prefer
million
. After 10 years of steady period. Train Use synonyms
preferance
amount reached over 5 Correct your spelling
preference
million
in 2025.Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, In 1970, Linking Words
travelling
Correct article usage
the travelling
with
bus Change preposition
by
Use synonyms
number
were around 4 Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
millions
, and after a decade, Change to singular
million
slightly
decreased trend can be observed for 20 years. These numbers were Add an article
the slightly
a slightly
brief
summary of the given line graph.Add an article
a brief
the brief
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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