Nowadays a growing number of boys and girls within normal weight ranges have an intense fear of gaining weight and therefore get anorexia. Why do you think a lot of teenagers have a strong desire to be skinny? What can be done to prevent this eating disorder?

Recently, it has become an ongoing issue that teenagers have

persured

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pressured

presumed

to be skinny regardless of their sex.

This

essay will present my personal view with respect to

this

current trend and will suggest several solutions dealing with

subsecuential

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subsequential

eating

disorder

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To begin

with, in

modern

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world, it has been beauty criteria that

more

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apply

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skinny is more attractive.

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this

notion is too simplified, it has been rooted in

youngsters

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mind

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deeply to the point where it can be hardly removed. In fact, I had a classmate who was suffered from anorexia and she eventually dropped out of my school

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she sent

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hospital

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owning

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to malnutrient. Through the experience, I got to

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strongly

believe that nothing is

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than being healthy both mentally and physically, still less,

to be

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beautiful never

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.  One key reason

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this

trend can be

attibuted

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attributed

to our lack of respect

toward

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for

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food

. After

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of double world wars, we

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appreciated for

food

despite famine

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been common about a century ago.

Additionally

,

this

ill-trend has been

acceralated

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accelerated

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the occurence

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occurence

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occurrence

of cheap

fastfood

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fast food

.

Thus

, I believe it is important for teenagers to be educated

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importance of substantials in school lessons by being taught about

history

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the history

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of famine and

function

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of

food

nutritions

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nutrition

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,

for example

. It will enhance

thier

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their

understanding of eating

habit

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habits

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for

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of

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human

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a human

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being

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beings

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.  In conclusion,

young

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the young

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generation has been likely to

exssesively

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excessively

desire to be

thiner

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thinner

, which can lead

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to recent

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social

peoblem

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problem

of

eading

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eating

reading

disorder

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.

However

, I believe it can be dealt with by

schhols’

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schools

provision of sufficient knowledge of

food

importance

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