Nowadays a growing number of boys and girls within normal weight ranges have an intense fear of gaining weight and therefore get anorexia. Why do you think a lot of teenagers have a strong desire to be skinny? What can be done to prevent this eating disorder?
Recently, it has become an ongoing issue that teenagers have
persured
to be skinny regardless of their sex. Correct your spelling
pressured
presumed
This
essay will present my personal view with respect to this
current trend and will suggest several solutions dealing with subsecuential
eating Correct your spelling
subsequential
disorder
.
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disorders
To begin
with, in modern
world, it has been beauty criteria that Add an article
the modern
more
skinny is more attractive. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Nevertheless
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,Nevertheless
this
notion is too simplified, it has been rooted in youngsters
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youngsters'
youngster's
mind
deeply to the point where it can be hardly removed. In fact, I had a classmate who was suffered from anorexia and she eventually dropped out of my school Correct subject-verb agreement
minds
since
she sent Correct word choice
because
for
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to
hospital
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the hospital
owning
to malnutrient. Through the experience, I got to Correct your spelling
owing
storongly
believe that nothing is Correct your spelling
strongly
important
than being healthy both mentally and physically, still less, Correct quantifier usage
more important
to be
beautiful never Change the verb form
being
outweigh
.
One key reason Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
of
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for
this
trend can be attibuted
to our lack of respect Correct your spelling
attributed
toward
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for
food
. After period
of double world wars, we Add an article
a period
less
appreciated for Add a missing verb
were less
food
despite famine had
been common about a century ago. Wrong verb form
having
Additionally
, this
ill-trend has been acceralated
by Correct your spelling
accelerated
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the occurence
occurence
of cheap Correct your spelling
occurrence
fastfood
. Correct your spelling
fast food
Thus
, I believe it is important for teenagers to be educated the
importance of substantials in school lessons by being taught about Change preposition
on the
history
of famine and Add an article
the history
function
of Correct article usage
the function
food
nutritions
, Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
for example
. It will enhance thier
understanding of eating Correct your spelling
their
habit
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habits
for
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of
human
Add an article
a human
the human
being
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
beings
young
generation has been likely to Add an article
the young
exssesively
desire to be Correct your spelling
excessively
thiner
, which can lead Correct your spelling
thinner
recent
social Change preposition
to recent
peoblem
of Correct your spelling
problem
eading
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eating
reading
disorder
. Fix the agreement mistake
disorders
However
, I believe it can be dealt with by schhols’
provision of sufficient knowledge of Correct your spelling
schools
food
importance
.Replace the word
imports
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