More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era,
internet
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the internet
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has made it possible for
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to access world knowledge at their fingertips but
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does not mean that there is no need
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,
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, I completely disagree with
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statement
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because
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are professionals in their subjects and help
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problems
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the problems
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of the
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. To commence with,
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have
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experience of many years in the same field. As professionals
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their
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, they know where the
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might encounter problems
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studying and they can help to mitigate the issue.
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, in the inter-school competitions of science projects, experienced
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are sent along
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students
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to guide them if any problem is encountered and polish their knowledge and provide new
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to help them win the competitions.
Moreover
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, the
information
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available on the internet can be false or incomplete as many websites charge for their content posted.
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, the available
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has to be verified by
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professional
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for its authenticity.
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,
teachers
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are the foundation stone of
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students'
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education.
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are responsible for teaching
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basic language in kindergarten to complex science and mathematic theorems during
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. If
basics
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the basics
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of
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grammar
are not taught, nobody will be able to have access to basic minimum knowledge,
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,
teachers
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play important role in one’s academic success.
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, in schools syllabus is designed as per the mental ability of the children and
tutors
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are responsible for educating the class
while
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following the established syllabus. Personal attention is given to children who are weak in a particular
subject
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to help them improve in academics which will not be possible if
teachers
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are removed from the education system. Passing percentages will fall across the globe.
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, if a student is weak in mathematics, the teacher will make him or her sit with
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the intelligent
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student
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students
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and provide extra classes after school to help the weak student improve before the exam.
To conclude
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,
teachers
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are professionals in their
subject
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and have extensive experience in teaching a particular
subject
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,
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and solve
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the problems of
students
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in class or during competitions.
Tutors
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also
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authenticate the
information
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available on the internet. School
teachers
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follow teaching
pattern
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patterns
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as
per
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on
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the children’s mental ability in schools for better learning and provide personal attention to weak
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by solving their issues.
Therefore
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, the role of
teachers
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cannot be diminished in the education system.
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