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Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #amount #money #children
Giving pocket
money
 to
children
,some people say that ,not good ,and many more people say its useful for
children
 to learn how to manage ,with a small volume
also
 they will learn to save,
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 strongly agree from the positive side,there few drawbacks here describing both views. Childhood is a basic pillar of learning stuff,when kids get , a little extent from their
parents
 or grandparents
parents
,first of ,all they to like spend funds ,by buying chocolates or some snacks,so leaders have to take initiative and teach them how to save with help of kiddy bank so that they can save some measure with that ,
children
 like to purchase toy or thing from their top
one
 on their listed items
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if they won't get any
money
 , everything purchased by their
parents
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when they grow older ,they will completely depend on others,they will not able to do their own self. etymologically If they go shopping wanting to buy toys or books,kids are unable to decide what to buy and they may buy with more value than it is worth because they do not know what it cost
due to
 lack of adverse. there few drawbacks,if
parents
 give
money
 to kids ,they should monitor,what they are doing with it, sometimes they may attract to the wrong
things
 like gambling is, buying so many
things
,more amount than what they had in their hand, borrowing debt,and unable to clear those,laying to
parents
,those will be avoided by monitoring of
parents
,
along with
 giving
money
,should teach them planing ,listing the items what they want,prioritising
things
,which
one
 required most,so it will be helpful for
children
 to how
things
 work out
one
 by
one
. In conclusion , in leading life,
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financial organisation is very essential, and family members play a vital role in it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial responsibility
  • independence
  • financial literacy
  • work ethic
  • effort and reward
  • impulsive purchases
  • budgeting skills
  • critical thinking
  • sense of entitlement
  • modest amounts
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