Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

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Dear Mr Harsh, I am writing

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letter with respect to borrowing your laptop for the next two days, as I have some problem with my computer. To commence with, as you know I have recently taken a few days working from home, as I had my leg broken in an accident. It is vital for me to attend my job and cannot take more leaves which can lead to my termination.

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, it is not possible for me to ask for a computer from anyone as I do not know many people in

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area. Not only, I am assigned a task for our new client but

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, I have a deadline to complete it by the end of

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week.

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, I broke my device in that accident.

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, I will make sure you do not face any privacy issues in order to, protect it can secure access to your files

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, the application that I am not supposed to use. I hope you understand my situation at the moment and hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Vandan Patel.

Vandanpatel0709Mon Mar 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in todays world, subjects like Science and technology are most important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this positive or negative development?

Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in rural areas. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.