Formal examination has become the most common way to assessing a student's performance. Do you think it's a positive or negative development, in your view?

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formal examination is the most famous of them. In my perspective
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should not be judged solely on the basis of formal examinations
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we must evolve and adopt new ways for better
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assessment
of children. As we are all aware
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the fact that every
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it is not
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activity.
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perform
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it is not compulsory that he performs well at swimming.
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are wholesome different and opposite as chess requires
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ability to calculate
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of physical
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strength
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ability and
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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