The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the trends in the
production
of Use synonyms
suits
, dresses and Use synonyms
coats
in a clothing factory over a 20-year period.
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It is clear that
the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
coats
increased steadily over the time shown, Use synonyms
while
there were fluctuations in both dress and suit Linking Words
production
.
In 1990, the largest Use synonyms
production
demand for Use synonyms
this
factory was for Linking Words
suits
, with 15 Use synonyms
million
pieces. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the figures for dresses and Linking Words
coats
were a mere 10 Use synonyms
million
and approximately 7 Use synonyms
million
respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
coats
rose so rapidly and consistently that it overtook that of dresses in 1995 at 13 Use synonyms
million
and of Use synonyms
suits
in 2001 at around 17 Use synonyms
million
. 2010 saw a peak in coat Use synonyms
production
of 25 Use synonyms
million
.
The Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
suits
fluctuated sharply during these 20 years, once peaking at around 22 Use synonyms
million
in 1995, but declining since Use synonyms
then
. After 2005, the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
suits
was revived again. Slight fluctuations could Use synonyms
also
be observed in dress Linking Words
production
, but in general, the numbers still increased and stood at 15 Use synonyms
million
pieces in 2010.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, suits, coats, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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