The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the trends in the
production
of suits
, dresses and coats
in a clothing factory over a 20-year period.
It is clear that
the production
of coats
increased steadily over the time shown, while
there were fluctuations in both dress and suit production
.
In 1990, the largest production
demand for this
factory was for suits
, with 15 million
pieces. By contrast
, the figures for dresses and coats
were a mere 10 million
and approximately 7 million
respectively. However
, the production
of coats
rose so rapidly and consistently that it overtook that of dresses in 1995 at 13 million
and of suits
in 2001 at around 17 million
. 2010 saw a peak in coat production
of 25 million
.
The production
of suits
fluctuated sharply during these 20 years, once peaking at around 22 million
in 1995, but declining since then
. After 2005, the production
of suits
was revived again. Slight fluctuations could also
be observed in dress production
, but in general, the numbers still increased and stood at 15 million
pieces in 2010.Submitted by xiexue1223 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, suits, coats, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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