The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the trends in the
production
of
suits
, dresses and
coats
in a clothing factory over a 20-year period.
It is clear that
the
production
of
coats
increased steadily over the time shown,
while
there were fluctuations in both dress and suit
production
. In 1990, the largest
production
demand for
this
factory was for
suits
, with 15
million
pieces.
By contrast
, the figures for dresses and
coats
were a mere 10
million
and approximately 7
million
respectively.
However
, the
production
of
coats
rose so rapidly and consistently that it overtook that of dresses in 1995 at 13
million
and of
suits
in 2001 at around 17
million
. 2010 saw a peak in coat
production
of 25
million
. The
production
of
suits
fluctuated sharply during these 20 years, once peaking at around 22
million
in 1995, but declining since
then
. After 2005, the
production
of
suits
was revived again. Slight fluctuations could
also
be observed in dress
production
, but in general, the numbers still increased and stood at 15
million
pieces in 2010.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, suits, coats, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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