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With the rise of e-book cone the decline in paper books. Some people see this is a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays,
people
 often use the internet by phone, and computer every day, the network is part of daily life and could not be separated. By the same token, the internet shortcuts the time of implementation like paying bills, buying goods even reading
books
.
Furthermore
, environmental awareness is rising up, there were many different types of online bookstores were known: Amazon,
Books
, Elite bookstore, Kingstone…etc. The online stores provide the service of
E-
books
 and real
books
, customs could choose the appropriate way for themselves and pay for it online.
This
 trend has sparked a debate among
people
 about whether it is a good step forward or not. In my opinion, there are some advantages to
E-
books
,
for example
, some stores provide discounts on prices
due to
 print costs,
besides
, readers could save the
E-
books
 in cloud storage, which may save more capacity and space and decrease deforestation. Most importantly, you just need an iPad or iPhone and can read
books
 everywhere, there are no limited spaces and no need to put a heavy
book
 in a bag if you are a speed reader, you can store many
books
 in the cloud, like an active library.
However
, in disadvantage of Electrical-
books
, they may lose some interest in reading a real
book
. Some
people
 enjoyed flipping pages of
books
, it could not
instead
 of E-
book
.
Moreover
, some famous writers may signature on their
books
, for memorial and collection,
paper
book
 makes an irreplaceable position. Eletrical-
books
 can cause eye strain and other health problems
due to
 prolonged exposure to screens. All things considered, there are several advantages to
E-
books
,
nevertheless
, I would rather like
paper
books
 than
E-
books
 because if I am the type of person who enjoyed smelling
paper
, there are some scents in the
paper
 and I have a whole wall for
book
 collection.
While
 the rise of
e-
books
 has many advantages, it
also
 has some disadvantages. Whether
e-
books
 will completely replace
paper
books
 remains to be seen, but
it is clear that
 the trend towards
e-
books
 is not going away anytime soon.
Therefore
, it is important for
people
 to weigh the pros and cons of each option and make an informed decision about which format they prefer. Ultimately, what matters most is that
people
 continue to read and engage with literature, regardless of the format in which they choose to do so.
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