Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?
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every year is a topic of discussion. I strongly agree that life will not be complicated when there are
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more
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around the world. The first reason would be
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human communication. Because
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are live creatures that have
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daily routines and
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daily interactions.
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, shopping and family care. A person cannot just sit behind the table and just do jobs
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to other
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during that period and they need one common language to speak about. So, speaking and communication is the reason that might need fewer
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. The second is about
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that
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to
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of
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for
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for vacation, business, visiting family and so on. To say more, when someone goes
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holiday in
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area with different mother
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, they cannot do their stuff and cannot connect to others with different issues.
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cannot help
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to have a good
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experience. Some may argue that it is not good to have fewer
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due, it is an element of
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.
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,
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and the base of
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will not change
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omitting the language., there is a lot to say about it which can
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on
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such
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as their traditions, foods, reactions, dances,
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. In conclusion,
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opinion about deleting
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every year is necessary
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an easier life. For two reasons, one is about individual communication which can survive us.
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as individuals are going abroad for different features. The 35 units
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allocated to petrol and oil in 1980. It saw a slight decline just under 32 two times
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1985 and 1995.
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, it had a dramatic growth since 2020 over 40.
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, petrol and oil will
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dramatically and will
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over 45 in 2030.
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