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Band 6.5

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

These days, people use technology in various areas
such
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 as reading a
book
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 online.
therefore
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, many men and women won't buy printed newspapers in the future. Because they can read them online. I completely agree with
this
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 view.
Firstly
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, the most important reason is that you can save
time
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.
For example
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, you want a
book
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 that your friend introduced to you so you should go to some bookstores to find it.
Moreover
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,
instead
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 of going to a bookstore, you can find it easily on the internet by searching on google.
As a result
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, you can save
time
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 and do other tasks in rest
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.
Secondly
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, you don't need to carry many things, which means everything you need, like a
book
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, is on your phone.
For instance
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, you should attend a class where you need many heavy books, so,
instead
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 of carrying many books, you can carry your phone and use it.
On the other hand
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, some people think
that is
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 not good for the
book
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's writer. Because they spend
time
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 writing a
book
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 to sell and make
money
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 If people read a
book
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 online without paying, the tutor can't earn
money
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 to spend their life.
However
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, the programmer can make an application which causes make
money
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 for the writer.
For example
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, if men and women want to save and read a
book
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, they have to install and download a special application for books,
then
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 they register it and each
time
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 they want to download a
book
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, pay
money
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 and the writer receives
money
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 from the application. In conclusion, whether we wanted it or not, technology is increasing and we have to know and learn it.
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, we have to know both the positive and the negative effects of technology.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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