schools should offer some type of physical education program to their students. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the years, the approach to educating
students
has constantly been evolving and one of the recent development is the debate of whether to or not inculcate physical
education
of any type into
students
' academic training
program
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. I strongly agree that
students
should have some sort of physical
education
added to their curriculum.
Firstly
, physical
education
promotes interest in physical activities. When
students
are
constistently
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exposed to some level of physical
education
, they develop
interest
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in these activities which ordinarily they may not have had if left on their own especially, with the rising shift towards
sedentary
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lifestyle.
For example
,
students
would normally prefer to watch television or play video games in their spare time but if there is some form of physical
education
in school
then
, they can identify areas of interest in
the
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physical
education
and
as a
result
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their day-to-day routine which in the long run will help them combat sedentary living.
Secondly
, it provides an outlet for relieving stress.
Students
who undergo
education
of any form occasionally are confronted with challenges which may be overwhelming and because of
this
develop psychological disorders which may present as anxiety or depression. Having physical
education
added to the training program of
students
presents an opportunity for them to let some stress out.
For instance
, it has been discovered that the level of enthusiasm and happiness in
students
increases after they participate in their physical
education
classes because it operates differently from their normal school work. In conclusion, adding physical
education
into
students
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learning
program
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has numerous advantages and will positively influence outcomes in the life of the
students
. I concur
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the proposition that it should be included in their learning schedule.
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