The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The following graph illustrates the
number
of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the number
of tourists visiting has increased from 1 million
to 3.5 million
over 7 years.
Firstly
, the number
of visitors staying on cruise ships increased from 0.2 million
to 0.5 million
between 2010 to 2011. Then
, the number
of visitors staying on cruise ships reduced from 0.5 to 0.2 between 2011 to 2012 and it increased again to 0.5 million
in 2013. From 2013 to 2017, it sharply increased from 0.5 million
to 2 million
.
Secondly
, the number
of visitors staying on the Island has steadily by 0.5 million
from 2010 to 2011. It increased from 0.5 million
to 1.5 million
from 2011 to 2013. Again, it has steadily by 1.5 million
from 2013 to 2015. It has reduced from 1.5 million
to 1.2 million
and again it has increased back to 1.5 million
at end of the year.Submitted by Niyoshakhalili on
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