Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Small group of
people
support to perform similar things in life
to live comfortable, but other oppose this
opinion by saying it is all time positive thing. I believe that having something new in life
not only give experience but also
help to make people
progressive.
On the one hand, people
feel uncomfortable to try any transformation in life
. If they do like that their brain does not allow them to do this
, because they might be afraid about weak ability of tackling a change
. As a result
they feel anxious. For example
: - Old generation like to use only old version keypad phones which mainly use for calling and text messages. By doing this
, they are neglecting themselves of the other advantages like capturing precious pictures, schedule important reminders, entertainment applications and etcetera. I believe that to complete the advancement of world, people
must try to become flexible and keep themselves update.
On the other hand
, changing things in life
give new experience to people
. By doing this
, people
go through with many aspects of ongoing situation which give new observations to handle the condition. As a result
, they face perfectly whenever that situation comes again in life
. For example
: - In 2009 Covid-19 pandemic, most of work places and schools were introduced by online services, customers and students which results the ways of utilization of services totally changed in among clients and students. If people
did not adapt these alternatives, today’s world conditions might be worst. So, everyone is ready to face the situations like pandemic 2019, if something will happen in future because Covid-19 gives a new experience to world level.
In conclusion, weather fewer individual are not feels pleasant to change
, but change
is inevitable. So, everyone must embrace change
to live a easy and meaningful life
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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