Some people think that because some children find some subject such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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It seems that some people believe that because some subjects like
mathematics
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philosophy
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are difficult they must be optional for
children
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, rather than obligatory. I disagree with
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idea and I consider that these subjects must be compulsory for every child because it helps them to develop and become an adult and are necessary for life. On the one hand, subjects
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as
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and
philosophy
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help
children
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to develop their skills and prepare for life. They are important because are used in everyday activities on different occasions.
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,
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is used to calculate money or for work in different sectors and
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to speak and express themselves better. If every child learns about them in schools,later on in their lives will be easier for them to express themselves and develop careers.
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, if a child does not like
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subject he needs to learn the importance of it and be encouraged to learn because of the benefits. Sometimes because some
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are spoiled they tend to say do not like something at school only to have more to play
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parents and teachers must be more involved in
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's lives and encourage them to be involved in these courses.
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of participating in these ,courses they will be able to calculate and have better jobs and express their opinion
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others who do not attend struggle in their life and find it more difficult to find jobs and speak clearly their opinions. In conclusion, I believe it is important for
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to learn about
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and
philosophy
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and these courses must be compulsatory in schools. The benefits of learning them will be seen when they will be adults.
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