Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about whether or not
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should be allowed to make decisions for themselves.
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I agree that permissive parenting can create self-centred
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, I
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believe that there are some potential benefits to giving
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more independence when it comes to
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. On the one hand, it is easy to imagine that too much freedom of choice in childhood could lead to people becoming selfish as adults.
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who are allowed to eat, wear or do whatever they want tend to be unaccustomed to making compromises or taking the wishes of
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into account. They may carry
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self-centred attitude into adulthood, and the prevailing culture of a whole society could become more individualistic and mean-spirited.
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, I have a friend whose
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were extremely lenient and let him make decisions about everything from what food he ate to what time he went to bed. Now, as an adult, he struggles to cooperate with
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in both social and work settings.
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,
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can help their
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to become independent but considerate adults by allowing them to make certain decisions. Many
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involve their
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in decision-making as a way to prepare them for adult life
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when they will need to live alone and fend for themselves.
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may take their
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children
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food shopping and encourage them to choose ingredients for a meal that they will help to cook for the family.
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kind of freedom can
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teach
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to consider
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,
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as siblings and friends,
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of thinking about their own selfish interests.
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,
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who are included in discussions about what activities to do at the weekend can learn to express their views but
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listen to the opinions of
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. In conclusion, the parenting style that empowers
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to make their own choices may make some
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selfish, but it may help
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to become more self-reliant as they grow up.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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