Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there are many
people
who want to move to an urban city from a rural area in order to explore the possibility of their future success. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
have a negative Use synonyms
thought
Fix the agreement mistake
thoughts
of
living in urban Change preposition
about
cities
in terms of Use synonyms
health
conditions. I understand why they think that way, because the more Use synonyms
people
, the higher the death rates. Use synonyms
However
, I personally think the environments in big Linking Words
cities
may not affect Use synonyms
people
's Use synonyms
health
in bad ways.
First of all, some major serious diseases Use synonyms
such
as diabetes and cancers have been increased not so much by the size of Linking Words
cities
, but by the change of lifestyle. Use synonyms
For example
, western food has been getting more and more popular in Japan and Linking Words
that is
related to the increase Linking Words
of
diabetics. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, it can not be said that the density of Linking Words
population
is connected with lifespans.
Correct article usage
the population
Secondly
, there are more exercise facilities like fitness gyms and yoga studios in urban Linking Words
cities
compared to rural areas. That environment provides Use synonyms
people
with more opportunities to think about their Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, many large events are hosted by big Linking Words
cities
. Use synonyms
For instance
, marathon events take place every year and a lot of Linking Words
people
from all over the world participate in those events.
In conclusion, some Use synonyms
people
are worried about how much big Use synonyms
cities
influence our Use synonyms
health
but I would say that the size of Use synonyms
cities
does not matter and if anything, there is more attention to Use synonyms
keep
Wrong verb form
keeping
people
healthy in big Use synonyms
cities
.Use synonyms
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