The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph gives information about the
number
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of
shops
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that closed and the
number
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of
shops
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that opened in one country from the year 2011 to 2018.
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, the
number
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of shop closures and openings both witnessed a downward trend. The
number
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of
shops
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closed was generally greater than the
number
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of
shops
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opened. The
number
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of shop closures dropped from around 6,500 in 2011 to a little over 5,000 in 2018. The
number
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of
shops
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closed decreased a little from 2011 to 2012 and rose to over 7,000 in 2013. It
then
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declined a little again in 2014. After that, the
number
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of
shops
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closed plummeted to below 1,000 in 2015 and it rose again to a little over 5,000 in 2016. The
number
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fluctuated slightly in the remaining two years of the period. The
number
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of shop openings dropped from about 8,500 in 2011 to 3,000 in 2018. The
number
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of
shops
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opened decreased dramatically from 2011 to 2012,
then
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rose again in the next two years to a little over 6,000. It
then
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reduced again to about 4000 in the year
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2015. The
number
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remained unchanged in 2016 and it increased a little bit in 2017 and
then
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declined to 3,000 in 2018.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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