The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph gives information about the
number
of shops
that closed and the number
of shops
that opened in one country from the year 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number
of shop closures and openings both witnessed a downward trend. The number
of shops
closed was generally greater than the number
of shops
opened.
The number
of shop closures dropped from around 6,500 in 2011 to a little over 5,000 in 2018. The number
of shops
closed decreased a little from 2011 to 2012 and rose to over 7,000 in 2013. It then
declined a little again in 2014. After that, the number
of shops
closed plummeted to below 1,000 in 2015 and it rose again to a little over 5,000 in 2016. The number
fluctuated slightly in the remaining two years of the period.
The number
of shop openings dropped from about 8,500 in 2011 to 3,000 in 2018. The number
of shops
opened decreased dramatically from 2011 to 2012, then
rose again in the next two years to a little over 6,000. It then
reduced again to about 4000 in the year of
2015. The Change preposition
apply
number
remained unchanged in 2016 and it increased a little bit in 2017 and then
declined to 3,000 in 2018.Submitted by annieeannie on
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