Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

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their sentences in a prison can not able to

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path when they were released from

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jail. There would be some reasons why

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and for consequences do not tend to be highly negative for society ,

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have to solve these problems. The first reason

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people

commit crimes again is that after serving their sentence , they may stay

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unemployed. They can not find jobs because

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they are hardened criminals. They are forced to continue illegal activities for

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money

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finding their old accomplices during employers are not wanting to risk their reputation and property by employing former criminals. Soaring crime rates are even higher for

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who suffer from both mental illness and substance abuse. Because they have lived in a prison where full of acts of mindless vandalism. In custody , there are

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who commit petty crimes

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kept with other serious offenders or

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who are likely to have good

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where all prisoners learn to effectuate criminal acts from each other. These offenders are more likely to commit new

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as they are released

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has

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negative influence

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their lifestyle. If

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after

releasing

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from custody to provide adequate treatment may well contribute to

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issues and social isolation that lead to

criminals

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acts. The

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have to create stuff for

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serving out their sentences

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designing programs on TV that correlated with respect between

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and offenders. In conclusion, despite

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further

crimes

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frequency situations there are some possible problems

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can solve .