the diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
the diagram illustrates the process by which carbonated drinks are made.
overall
, the process of making carbonated drinks requires five stages in total. it starts with the raw material being transported from the factory by mechanical means and culminates when bottles and cans of final products are packaged to deliver to the supermarket.
looking at the detail, in the first stage, raw material transmitted from the factory is filtered by a small part of the machine, Linking Words
then
the refined drink is softened, and chemicals are added to it. following that, Linking Words
water
is pumped through a pipe into electric heaters, which later is converted into an enclosed container via a cooling pipe. carbon dioxide is added to the amount of Use synonyms
water
in Use synonyms
this
container.
the process continues with carbonated Linking Words
water
being transported to a mixing tank through a long pipe, where the addition of colouring, syrup and flavour is included. afterwards, the carbonated Use synonyms
water
is filtered again in order to fill in bottles and cans. Use synonyms
consequently
, these bottles and cans are packaged into boxes that are delivered to the supermarket.Linking Words
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