Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and govenment should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
century, the right
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university
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education
has become a controversial topic. People generally have mixed views on
this
matter; some might be of the extreme opinion it is
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government that should deal with the
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problem
while
others may say
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society
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should embark on the issue.
However
, on my personal stance,
this
essay will present why I am convinced by the latters’ view from the main two perspectives on government condition and on capitalism wealth inequality.
To begin
with, one obvious fact is that governments have a
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myriad
of topics that they have to discuss
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national
conference
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every year. Considering
this
situation, it does not seem that they do have enough time to focus only on educational affairs. They have to undertake imposing topics
such
as
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international
relationships and the breakdown of annual budgets.
Therefore
, I believe that it is more realistic for
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each
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local
society
to work out on the matter
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university
rights by ourselves than to put more burden on public
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administrations
administration
than they have today. 
On the other hand
, another thing that I strongly believe is that all
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people
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the people
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should have an even right to attend
university
regardless of their
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financial
condition.
However
, it is
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unfair case that most universities offer their educational opportunity with
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forbiddenly
expensive tuition
fee
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fees
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, which deters a lot of people under few
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fortunate
financial
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to enter. In order to tackle
this
dilemma, I would like to suggest
this
plan that,
for example
, universities offer
a
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plenty of scholarship systems for
such
candidates by taking more
fee
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fees
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from wealthy students.
This
cycle would help teenagers from deprived
family
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families
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to have education
opportunity
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and
concequently
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consequently
reduce the wealth gap in
the
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society
. In conclusion,
the
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modern societies have confronted the problem
over
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university
rights.
However
, it can be coped with by us as a
society
not by
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the government
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, taking account of
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the busyness
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of public bodies and our affordance
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from
wealth
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the wealth
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gap.
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