Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and govenment should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

century, the right

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university

eduaction

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education

has become a controversial topic. People generally have mixed views on

this

matter; some might be of the extreme opinion it is

only

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government that should deal with the

peoblem

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problem

while

others may say

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society

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should embark on the issue.

However

, on my personal stance,

this

essay will present why I am convinced by the latters’ view from the main two perspectives on government condition and on capitalism wealth inequality.

To begin

with, one obvious fact is that governments have a

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myriad

of topics that they have to discuss

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national

conference

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every year. Considering

this

situation, it does not seem that they do have enough time to focus only on educational affairs. They have to undertake imposing topics

such

as

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international

relationships and the breakdown of annual budgets.

Therefore

, I believe that it is more realistic for

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each

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local

society

to work out on the matter

about

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university

rights by ourselves than to put more burden on public

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administrations

administration

than they have today. 

On the other hand

, another thing that I strongly believe is that all

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people

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should have an even right to attend

university

regardless of their

finansial

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financial

condition.

However

, it is

the

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unfair case that most universities offer their educational opportunity with

forbittedly

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forbiddenly

expensive tuition

fee

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, which deters a lot of people under few

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fortunate

financial

condition

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to enter. In order to tackle

this

dilemma, I would like to suggest

this

plan that,

for example

, universities offer

a

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plenty of scholarship systems for

such

candidates by taking more

fee

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fees

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from wealthy students.

This

cycle would help teenagers from deprived

family

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families

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to have education

opportunity

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and

concequently

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consequently

reduce the wealth gap in

the

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society

. In conclusion,

the

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modern societies have confronted the problem

over

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university

rights.

However

, it can be coped with by us as a

society

not by

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, taking account of

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of public bodies and our affordance

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from

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gap.