The table below gives information about the languages that high school students speak at home in one school district in the USA
The table gives data about the top
languages
spoken at home by students
in 2008 and 2014.
Spanish was the most common language
used with 15 110 students
in 2008 and 28 816 schoolchildren in 2014. The Korean
language
accounted for the second most widespread language
. The number of pupils speaking Korean
was 3029 in 2008 and it decreased to 2735 in 2014. The third most popular language
was Vietnam with figures of 2557 and 1467 children between 2008 and 2014. The Chinese language
was spoken by 1875 school students
in 2008 and this
figure soared to 4670 in 2014. There was a small number of 430 Arabic speakers at school and it grew a lot to 1302 speakers.
The rarest spoken speech was Nepalese with only 85 students
in 2008 and the number of spoken Nepalese language
went up to 439 in 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
languages
Korean
, Vietnamese
Correct word choice
and Vietnamese
languages
were considered the second and third most widely spoken languages
in 2008 and Chinese became the second most commonly spoken language
therefore
Korean
ranked third place among languages
in 2014.Submitted by idantiris19 on
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