The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
the line graph compares the
number
of newly opened shops
and the number
of closed shops
from 2011 to 2018 in a country.
overall
, it is clear that
the number
of both opened new shops
and closed shops
saw a decrease during this
period. the number
of closed shops
experienced a dramatic change.
About 8500 shops
were opened in 2011, while
the figure
for opened shops
rapidly declined to around 4000 in 2012. by 2014, it rose to about 6100. after that, the number
of opened shops
fell back to around 4000, and remain stable at this
figure
by 2017. by 2018, the figure
for opened shops
decreased to 3000.
there were about 6300 shops
closed in 2011. during the next three years, the figure
for closed shops
fluctuated between 6000 and 7000. by 2015, the number
of closed shops
reached its lowest point at 700 (fell from 6600) . then
its figure
increased back to 5200 rapidly by 2016. from 2016 to 2018, the figure
for closed shops
steadily remained at about 5200 and was higher than the figure
for opened shops
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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