The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
the line graph compares the
number
of newly opened
shops
and the
number
of closed
shops
from 2011 to 2018 in a country.
overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of both opened new
shops
and closed
shops
saw a decrease during
this
period. the
number
of closed
shops
experienced a dramatic change. About 8500
shops
were opened in 2011,
while
the
figure
for opened
shops
rapidly declined to around 4000 in 2012. by 2014, it rose to about 6100. after that, the
number
of opened
shops
fell back to around 4000, and remain stable at
this
figure
by 2017. by 2018, the
figure
for opened
shops
decreased to 3000. there were about 6300
shops
closed in 2011. during the next three years, the
figure
for closed
shops
fluctuated between 6000 and 7000. by 2015, the
number
of closed
shops
reached its lowest point at 700 (fell from 6600) .
then
its
figure
increased back to 5200 rapidly by 2016. from 2016 to 2018, the
figure
for closed
shops
steadily remained at about 5200 and was higher than the
figure
for opened
shops
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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