Plastic bags, plactic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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According to

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three decades humanity faces the most serious challenge because of

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problem. Notwithstanding with latest attempts of different countries, companies and

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continues

to exist as long as people continue to recklessly dispose of

plastic

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waste

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. There are millions of tons of

plastic

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being produced on the daily basis over the world. Because of specific

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material could become dangerous for the planet if it is not

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properly utilized. Unlike other chemicals,

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does not

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short time period. It continues to exist and spoil the atmosphere

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CO2 emission. It could dispose

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lying in

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pile of other

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. It is a

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fact, that no trees or animals will live near

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type of place in the next century. Nowadays, there are many public

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, not many actions have been done so far. There

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no self-evident state programs aimed to reduce carbon emission

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ignorance as long as many of us continue to turn a blind eye to the planet’s health.

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by significant changes in the funding.

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independent meta-governmental organisation (which will monitor equally all states) need to be created.

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, new pieces of legislation, which will create supplemental incentives for people to recycle their

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, are required.

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climate change should be implemented into all school programs all around the world. We will not have any progress in the fighting of

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approach

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until we take the responsibility for

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process.

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everyone should pay attention to their daily habits, review them, and make changes (if needed). Only global changes could help to prevent

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without capital punishement our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase.capital punishment is essential to control violence in society

In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

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