Plastic bags, plactic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

According to
the latest World Health Organization report,
last
three decades humanity faces the most serious challenge because of
pollution
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problem. Notwithstanding with latest attempts of different countries, companies and
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non-governmental
institutions,
this
problem
contunies
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continues
to exist as long as people continue to recklessly dispose of
plastic
waste
. There are millions of tons of
plastic
being produced on the daily basis over the world. Because of specific
chemestry
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chemistry
reactions,
this
material could become dangerous for the planet if it is not
being
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properly utilized. Unlike other chemicals,
plastic
,
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does not
detiriorate
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deteriorate
deteriorated
in
the
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short time period. It continues to exist and spoil the atmosphere
by
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CO2 emission. It could dispose
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many decades (
instead
of
few
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years)
while
lying in
the
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pile of other
plastic
. It is a
well known
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fact, that no trees or animals will live near
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this
type of place in the next century. Nowadays, there are many public
discussicions
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discussions
of
plastic
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waste
issue
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.
However
, not many actions have been done so far. There
is
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no self-evident state programs aimed to reduce carbon emission
as well as
people’
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ignorance as long as many of us continue to turn a blind eye to the planet’s health.
This
should be
overcomed
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by significant changes in the funding.
Besides
,
the
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independent meta-governmental organisation (which will monitor equally all states) need to be created.
Moreover
, new pieces of legislation, which will create supplemental incentives for people to recycle their
plastic
waste
, are required.
Finally
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climate change should be implemented into all school programs all around the world. We will not have any progress in the fighting of
irresponsible
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approach
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to
plastic
waste
,
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until we take the responsibility for
this
process.
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everyone should pay attention to their daily habits, review them, and make changes (if needed). Only global changes could help to prevent
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disaster
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.
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