The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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The maps illustrate the Norbtion industrial

area

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in its current form and its proposal layout.

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it is clear that

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the plan is to construct more resident houses and infrastructure to substitute the previous factories and the transportation system becomes more convenient. Currently, the Norbiton industrial

area

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is located on the east of the town and there is a roundabout that connects a southern and an eastern road.

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, Many factories are built beside the eastern road and roundabout. To the north of the Norbiton industrial

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, there is farmland which is opposite the river.

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the proposal, only the roundabout and river will remain at the original site.

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, all the factories are demolished to make way for several houses by road, a school in the east of the

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, and a playground beside the river. A shop and medical centre will be added as well.

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, a new bridge will be constructed over the brook leading to residential houses which are built on the farmland.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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