Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Dear Anna, I hope you're doing splendidly! I am writing

this

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letter to

know

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learn

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about you, and to tell you about myself. As you know, my English teacher sent me your profile, so that I can make new connections with other people because I am an Introverted person.

Apart from

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this

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, my name is Manjinder Kaur, I have been living in Canada for the

last

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3 years. I went there for my higher studies. At that

time

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, I

took

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was

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admission

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admitted

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Wireless Networking because I did my Bachelor's in Computer Science and Engineering.

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, I have a lot of interest in setting up a network connection.

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, I do many things in my leisure

time

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such

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as reading books, doing craft work, and spending

time

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with my family members.

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, I love to read holy books in my free

time

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because it helps me to make my mind relax and calm. As we are friends now, I would like to know about you, like what type of hobbies do you have? Or is there anything specific you like to do in your free

time

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? I am eagerly waiting for your response. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Manjinder Kaur

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coherence and cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance readability.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs for better clarity.

task achievement

Try to be more specific about your hobbies when asked about your penfriend's interests.

suitable writing tone

The letter has a warm and friendly tone which is engaging for the reader.

complete response

You successfully included details about your interests and background, aligning well with the task prompt.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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