It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some
people
argue that using
driverless
cars
should be promoted now as it can make a contribution to
people
and our community. I do appreciate
this
statement, but in my opinion, some possible problems, resulting from its widespread, should not be trivialised. On the one hand, there are various benefits that come with the use of
driverless
cars
. First of all, they could improve driving safety, as we all know that a large proportion of traffic accidents are actually caused by human error,
such
as difficulty concentrating
due to
fatigue, etc. 
Secondly
, using
driverless
cars
could aid
people
, especially the handicapped and elderly
people
, by offering them access to go out freely.
Furthermore
, with
driverless
cars
,
people
can spend time doing other things, like entertainment, during their commute or travelling as they are free from having to hold the steering wheel.
On the other hand
,
driverless
cars
are still considered by the populace as something high-tech.
Therefore
, it should not be expected that
people
will change their minds and accept
this
new design overnight, just as Rome could not be built in a day.
In addition
, with the development and predictable wide spread of
driverless
cars
, the related new traffic rules may
also
need to be discussed and modified. Another ensuing social issue may be the unemployment of drivers, which should
also
be taken into account. In conclusion, I do support the use of
driverless
cars
for their many merits.
However
, we should not ignore the potential problems underneath it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • sensors
  • human error
  • traffic congestion
  • mobility
  • displacement
  • fuel efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • pollution control
  • ethical considerations
  • legal framework
  • data privacy
  • overreliance
  • system failures
  • connectivity
  • decision-making
  • security concerns
  • economic impact
  • maintenance
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