The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams present the
number
of shop closures and openings in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed showed a marginal decline, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
that opened witnessed a significant drop during the period.
It can be seen that the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
that opened had a marked drop from about 8500 in 2011 to slightly less than 4000 in 2012 Use synonyms
then
grew to just above 6000 in 2014. Linking Words
Having
Unnecessary verb
The
the
declined to 4000 in 2015 Correct article usage
apply
then
the date with a minor fluctuation from 2015 to 2017, and Linking Words
then
the next decade saw a consistent drop.
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By contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed experience fluctuation from 2011 to 2014. The figure for shop closures plunged to about 600 in 2015 after which soared to slightly more than 5000 in 2016 and Use synonyms
then
remained steady until the end of the period.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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