The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams present the

number

of shop closures and openings in one country from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the

number

of

shops

that closed showed a marginal decline,

while

the

number

of new

shops

that opened witnessed a significant drop during the period. It can be seen that the

number

of new

shops

that opened had a marked drop from about 8500 in 2011 to slightly less than 4000 in 2012

then

grew to just above 6000 in 2014.

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declined to 4000 in 2015

then

the date with a minor fluctuation from 2015 to 2017, and

then

the next decade saw a consistent drop.

By contrast

, the

number

of

shops

that closed experience fluctuation from 2011 to 2014. The figure for shop closures plunged to about 600 in 2015 after which soared to slightly more than 5000 in 2016 and

then

remained steady until the end of the period.