The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The map provided the details of modifications of West Park Secondary School which occurred from 1950 to 2010.
First,
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houses and farmland were replaced significantly. The houses were replaced by a car place and a science block was built next to the institute. Among all facilities and fields, farmland was changed the most, it was refurbished into a sports field in1980. After that, it became the extension of the car place in 2010.
Furthermore
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due to
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the expansion of the car park during the given period, the sports field and the playground were shrunk to approximately half the size.
Finally
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, the science block had remained the same size since it was added by the side of the main building of the school between 1980 and 2010. In summary, the location of the main road and the school did not have modifications.
Although
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the science block was built and remained that size, other fields had an obvious transformation.
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