Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals do something about it.

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It is an undeniable fact that environmental problems are becoming more dangerous day by day.The role of government and individuals in reducing pollution. which is always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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