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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

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Over the years, the number of overweight children has increased and the situation is getting worse
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 medical experts. People argue about two different reasons that have brought
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 dramatic condition, someone believes that being overweight is the direct consequence of the growing number of fast
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 outlets,
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, others think that
parents
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 are taking on
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 problem. On one hand, society has changed the habits and the culture of
food
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. In recent years, it has grown the presence of fast foods
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 the increased demand from the population. After all, junk
food
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 is cheaper than healthy
food
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 and
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 it tastes good.
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, they are more attracted to these kinds of
food
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 the fact they could buy it with little money.
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, fast
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 advertisements are more attractive, and their shops are located close to schools in order to have a better impact on children's needs.
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, young people will always choose hamburgers and French fries rather than a healthy salad.
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, others believe in a lack of education among offspring and
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, the root is based on
parents
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. Nowadays, even
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 have lost the importance of eating good
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 in order to preserve people’s health.
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 trend comes from the lack of time to cook and
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 the loss of passion for cooking. Sometimes, even
parents
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 prefer to eat junk cuisine
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 the fact it is cheaper than others. After all,
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 behaviour of not looking after the children’s health is becoming more and more common. In conclusion, I agree with both of the two views, as
parents
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 and the increase in fast
food
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 make up for the problem. Society should promote more activities in order to increase awareness of eating junk
food
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 and its consequences.
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