The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graphs below illustrate the
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
people who travel abroad between 1985 and 1995 and the percentage of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
in Australia’s market.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the trend of Linking Words
Japanese
tourism has increased over ten years,Use synonyms
in particular
, reaching its Linking Words
peak
in the Use synonyms
last
years.
Linking Words
Firstly
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
travelling abroad has trebled, starting at 5 and reaching its Use synonyms
peak
at 15 million people. The value shows a steady growth until 1990, Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
number
of people going abroad decreased slightly to just over 10 million in 1991. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
number
increased significantly during the second half of the decade, reaching its Use synonyms
peak
at 15 million Use synonyms
Japanese
travelling abroad.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market registered a sharp increase during the decade analyzed. The percentage increased significantly until 1988 by 5 per cent, Linking Words
then
the value decreased slightly in the following year to just over 4 points. Linking Words
By contrast
, the percentage of Linking Words
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
travelling to Australia increased sharply, reaching its Use synonyms
peak
at 7 per cent in 1993.
The two graphs provide the Use synonyms
overall
trend of Linking Words
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
travelling abroad, which has increased significantly between 1985 and 1995.Use synonyms
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