The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graphs below illustrate the
number
of Japanese
people who travel abroad between 1985 and 1995 and the percentage of Japanese
tourists
in Australia’s market.
Overall
, the trend of Japanese
tourism has increased over ten years,in particular
, reaching its peak
in the last
years.
Firstly
the number
of Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad has trebled, starting at 5 and reaching its peak
at 15 million people. The value shows a steady growth until 1990, then
the number
of people going abroad decreased slightly to just over 10 million in 1991. Finally
, the number
increased significantly during the second half of the decade, reaching its peak
at 15 million Japanese
travelling abroad.
Secondly
, Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market registered a sharp increase during the decade analyzed. The percentage increased significantly until 1988 by 5 per cent, then
the value decreased slightly in the following year to just over 4 points. By contrast
, the percentage of Japanese
tourists
travelling to Australia increased sharply, reaching its peak
at 7 per cent in 1993.
The two graphs provide the overall
trend of Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad, which has increased significantly between 1985 and 1995.Submitted by musiccofrancesca250100 on
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