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The Spread of English as a global language is an issue nowadays. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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English
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language
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 is a well-known dialect of today’s era. Many articulates that the extension of
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language
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 is a concern of today’s world. There are many pros and cons
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exists
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 in spreading
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. Howbeit, I firmly believe that its positives
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 its negatives. There are numerous
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compelling advantages which support my statement but
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the first
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 and foremost benefit is a single communication source for transferring the message.
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, In
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an international
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 level in order to capture the international market. If people learn
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 it will provide
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job opportunities for the learner and boost the economy of the nation.
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, Source for exploring new cultures. In
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the elaboration
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of
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statement
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 it can
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 that a person can learn about new cultures because it would become a single source for the different
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 of people.
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a recent survey that was conducted by
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Cambridge University has shown Students
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English
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 linguistic skill
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 more updated about
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global challenges as compared to their peers who have just native
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skill
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, disadvantages
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.
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, it can cause of ruin the local heritage.
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, it could
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 that
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 learning a new dialect people get familiar with
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a new
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culture
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 and try to adopt
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culture
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cultures
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. In order to give
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an illustration
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 of
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 statement most south
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examples where
English
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 is a popular
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 and most of the young generation who
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this
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language
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 try to bring modernity
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 their lifestyles after looking
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 the
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culture
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. In conclusion, I pen down by saying that
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 of spreading
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English
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the English
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language
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 are more which can
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 in terms of enhancing the national economy and exploring new
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culture
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cultures
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. But its cons cannot be
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neglectable
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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