Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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people
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many issues.
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considered one of the results of many
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many chances to select any
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they live and how they enjoy. In conclusion,
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of choices the world has become
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, and knowing and realising of other
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this
view.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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