Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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technological development has made

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rise, and difficulties reduce. On the one hand, despite the fact that reducing technological

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maybe make the living more simplistic,it

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paramount key to

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many issues.

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promotion of food systems

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considered one of the results of many

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more advanced, creating and following a lot of diets are

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many chances to select any

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in all places of the world and have many

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of nutrients,and all

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they live and how they enjoy. In conclusion,

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mentioned above, it can be reiterated that with

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of choices the world has become

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, and knowing and realising of other

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may be quite simple these days, and I agree with

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