Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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as girls will talk softly and more boys willing to help out in the class.

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confident in many aspects, be it handling daily tasks or academic performance.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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tailored education
reducing distractions
academic performance
gender-specific
learning needs
teaching methods
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social interaction
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cooperation
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Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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