You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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Dear Tommy, How are you recently? Thank you very much for letting me

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stay with you and your family during my stay in England. I was so happy and honoured that I could live with you for a week

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attending a training course in England

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month . As I was allowed to stay at your place and did not need to rent another accommodation, it really helps me to save a large amount of money. During my stay, your family were very nice and welcoming. I missed all the meals prepared by Uncle George and Auntie May as they were delicious. I

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enjoyed the time of interacting with them and listening to the fascinating stories of their life.

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I just stayed at your place for a week only, I really miss you guys after I returned to Hong Kong . Once again, thanks a lot for your hospitality. Please send my gratitude to your parents. I hope that I can see you and your family soon in the future. Best wishes, Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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178 words

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