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Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However, it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy rate is on the increase. Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the
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 few decades, illiteracy has traditionally been viewed widely in underdeveloped
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 it is becoming a huge concern in western
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 nowadays.In
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 essay, I will discuss the possible causes for
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 issue and even its effect on society.
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 with, some of the causes that allow
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 problem mostly surround the lack of means
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 as financial problems related to
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, the lack of family supports and awareness some children cannot pay higher tuition fees ,especially the poor ones.
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, some employed individuals around the world who cannot find work because of a lack of employment or only because they cannot afford to pursue their higher
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 may have been involved in crime and other illegal issues .
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 financial problems and the poverty that are facing worldwide these days.
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, as an effect of it, the government and other cooperation have to implement some measures and provide funds and facilities to the nations to support each social class steadily and
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 the social barriers can lead to illiteracy .
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 , restrictions on girls'
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 in some societies ,
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 some of them can be forced by their parents into early marriage.As result, the higher level of poverty can provoke social crimes and many other negative effects. In conclusion, the value of
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 cannot be underestimated.I believe that some authorities should apply measures like lower educational costs and offering grants in underdeveloped
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 to reduce illiteracy in western
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 and all over the globe.

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