The maps below show a center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
These maps display the future development plans of Islip park in the same place, and some new housing in the southeast of Islip
town
, and what the Use synonyms
town
centre looks like now.
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this
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town
centre will be covered by a ring Use synonyms
road
after the planned finish. And there will be more facilities and housing in the northern downtown. The location of the school will remain and it will become more convenient because of the new carriageway.
The Use synonyms
town
now has many shops on both sides of the Main Use synonyms
road
, half of the shops will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing after the development finishes. Use synonyms
In addition
, there will be pedestrians-only areas in the future in the north of the shops.
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road
on the east side of the school, the dual carriageway, which can access back to the main Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there will be a smaller size ofLinking Words
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the
town
, just next to the park.Use synonyms
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