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The maps below show a center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show a center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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These maps display the future development plans of Islip
town
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, and what the
town
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 centre looks like now.
Overall
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this
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town
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 centre will be covered by a ring
road
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 after the planned finish. And there will be more facilities and housing in the northern downtown. The location of the school will remain and it will become more convenient because of the new carriageway. The
town
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 now has many shops on both sides of the Main
road
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, half of the shops will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing after the development finishes.
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, there will be pedestrians-only areas in the future in the north of the shops. There will be a
road
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 on the east side of the school, the dual carriageway, which can access back to the main
road
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.
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, there will be a smaller size of
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park in the same place, and some new housing in the southeast of Islip
town
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, just next to the park.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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