Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Other believe that they should focus on building new home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although
it is sometimes thought that growing trees
and making gardens
by city
maker
ought to be good, other Fix the agreement mistake
makers
people
believe that the focus should be on developing new houses. In my opinion, I consider that growing up more
greenery by local government in Change preposition
with more
local
region helps Add an article
the local
people
better for
their life.
On the one hand, some Change preposition
apply
people
think that city
council does great Correct article usage
the city
jobs
by growing more greenery in Fix the agreement mistake
job
city
and I agree. I mean, growing more plants and making more Add an article
the city
gardens
not only help to
birds and animals, but they help Change preposition
apply
to
human beings. Change preposition
apply
For example
, trees
give shelter to birds and local animals like cows and dogs etc. People
can also
rest behind the tree. Additionally
, People
are now going to gardens
for doing exercise. Many of the local charity is arranging exercise training classes into
the Change preposition
in
gardens
. Furthermore
, Trees
are one of the sources of rain
cycle process. If Correct article usage
the rain
trees
is
not available Change the verb form
are
in
the land Change preposition
on
then
it might chance not to come rain and rain
cycle process can be ruined.
Correct article usage
the rain
On the other hand
, it is often believed that developing more houses are
beneficial for Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
individuals. Research said that the population is increasing day by day, which means Correct article usage
apply
people
need more houses to live.
Change preposition
in.
Therefore
, the government should concentrate to build homes and it is useful too for them, according to
some. For example
, if people
live in high-rise buildings or flats, they have chance
to meet diverse Correct article usage
a chance
people
and build relationships. Another reason is
why Unnecessary verb
apply
people
focus on building apartments is that soil does not blow in the air and area
Correct article usage
the area
remain
clean. Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
As a result
, people
are not suffering from health
Add an article
a health
issue
which is Fix the agreement mistake
issues
cause
by soil.
In conclusion, in recent years, some Change the form of the verb
caused
people
tend to make more gardens
and growing
more plants in their Wrong verb form
grow
city
, while
other
thought that making Fix the agreement mistake
others
home
helps better Correct article usage
a home
then
that. Replace the word
than
While
people
may vary in their opinions, I think that people
stand a better life if they are encouraged to grow greenery arround
the Correct your spelling
around
city
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