"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media." Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

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controvertial

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controversial

debate

whether

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or not news related to criminal

affair

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affairs

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could give

the

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advert impact

to

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on

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society.

This

essay will identify my personal view which is of the opinion that

such

imformation

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information

should be put restriction on to some extent, considering the two main points regarding potential criminals and ex-offences. The most

concerned

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respect when media shares criminal

contents

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content

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is its great effect

for

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on

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society as a whole.

Although

it has the power to scare ordinary people, it

also

has another

possiblity

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possibility

to motivate

indivisuals

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individuals

who attempt to engage

into

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in

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offence. In

this

situation,

media

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the media

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might supply them with advantageous detail,

for example

, what mistake the reported intimate made to be put

a

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to a

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prison sentence, which would be

hint

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a hint

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for them to avoid the

misbihaviour

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misbehaviour

.

Therefore

, the

mainstreams

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mainstream

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may provide

future

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the future

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offence

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offences

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with

benefitial

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beneficial

information when planning. Another danger point we should be aware

is

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of is

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the recent increasing percentage of

second

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a second

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offence

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offences

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. I believe it can be attributed to the current sharing culture by

massmedia

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mass media

since any

crinimal

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criminal

history

are

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never concealed from

internet

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the internet

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after they reported to

public

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the public

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.

For instance

, when an ex-prisoner applied for a job, the offered firm would search

candidates'

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candidate's

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name

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names

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online and his name would come up with his crime data. It would discourage the enterprise to hire him regardless of his capacity and lead him to

next

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the next

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crime because he would not have any tools to earn money to survive in

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a nomal

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nomal

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normal

society.

Thus

, In conclusion, despite plenty of

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problems

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problem

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,problem

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the world embraced in the

last

century improving, crime has still remained

as

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apply

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an ongoing issue for us. I believe it has been up to

media

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the media

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to some extent,

hence

they should restrict themselves in order not to lead any people to be an offender.