Some people think the news has no real connection to people lives, so reading newspapers or watching news programs on television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

There are
also
opinions that it is not
impotant
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important
to be aware of the
news
. Some have argued that reading newspapers or watching
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programmes
is a waste of time knowing the
news
, so some people think the
news
is not necessary
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their lives. I disagree with
this
proposal.
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essay will
demostrate
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demonstrate
why its proponents are correct. On the one
hand
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news
are
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also
painted in the newspapers, so people get information about the happenings in the world from these newspapers.
For instance
, they can know
that
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are happening in other cities.
On the other hand
, TVs
also
show international
news
.
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example
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they can take precautions by watching
weather
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forecast
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forecasts
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and various crimes on TV. It can be good to hear about
this
news
. In
conclusion
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people get
news
about
differnt
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different
topics from
newspaper
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newspapers
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or television.
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