Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
For some individuals, becoming self-employed is a preferable choice as their main source of income,
instead
of working as a Linking Words
staff
in an already established business. Use synonyms
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due to
the work contract Linking Words
that is
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, there are some drawbacks that come with Linking Words
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such
as uncertain payment and the absence of extra perks.
Working contracts that are given by the employer can be a burden to the employee, especially in Linking Words
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economy where it is hard to get a good amount of pay just from Linking Words
one
job. Use synonyms
This
is because the contract forbids the Linking Words
staff
in Use synonyms
one
company to have another job. Use synonyms
For example
, in a tech company, even though the salary is not a lot, especially for junior Linking Words
staff
, it is not allowed for them to have side jobs in order to minimize data leakage that may harm the client. Use synonyms
Hence
, many working classes decided to become Linking Words
a freelancers
to pursue more opportunities in order to have more than Correct the article-noun agreement
a freelancer
freelancers
one
salary.
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Nevertheless
, no fixed amount of money that they can get per month Linking Words
as well as
not having additional incentives Linking Words
besides
their main wage could be the drawbacks that may happen as a freelancer. Linking Words
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then
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besides
payment with money. Linking Words
Whereas
a company Linking Words
staff
can get their health insurance covered by the organisation.
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To conclude
, people choose to be independent workers to distance themselves from work contracts that could limit them from earning additional wages. But in working outside of the organisation, salary may become uncertain, and rarely will they get additional incentives.Linking Words
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