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Marriage is seen as an important part of life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of marrying a person at a young age? Explain.

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Wedding plays an important role in human life but there has always been a debate on what is the suitable age for a person to marry.Some populations suggest marrying in the early twenties is best
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 others do not concede to them. so what should be the best age for
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?in my opinion, anywhere between 25 to 30. Certainly, there are many benefits of early
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, In the early twenties, youngsters are quite lively and the wedding gives them a partner to share their happiness with.
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, One of the biggest advantages of marrying early is moral and financial help. most of the
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 in new-adult life a lot of folks experience many complications
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 as College Debt, Job hunting, professional pressures and etc. a suitable partner will always be there for your help and support you in your hardships. a big advantage
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 would be the romantic relationship between couples as they would have enough
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 to get to know each other better. Meanwhile, on the other side , early
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 can lead to many problems .having a child could be one of the biggest headaches as in these economic crises, it is hard for the public to even afford home deposits and having a child can increase many miscellaneous expenses which probably would be out of budget for new couples. a survey on
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 topic was conducted in 2018. the result showed that folk who married at an early age had more divorces than the crowd who married a little late. the reason could be that most people do not get enough
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 to get to know each other before
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 and it causes troubles in future.
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 . the best
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 to plan a
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 is when you get enough experience of how life works and are financially stable to handle the future expenses which might occur as surprises.
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