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You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter •tell him/her about the problem with your photos • say which photo you would like him/her to send you • explain why you need this photo

#friend #holiday #photos #shot #•tell #photo
Dear Ram, Hope you
well
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 I am writing
this
 letter regarding the
photos
. During
last
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the last
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 summer
holidays
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,holidays
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 we spend days together at the Kodai
kannal
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Kanal
channel
kennel
. we had taken
lot
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 of
photos
in
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with
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 your DSLR camera during the holidays.
On
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 the end of my holiday
trip
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 you had
transfer
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transferred
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 the
photos
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photo
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 copies to my hard drive now
its
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 corrupted. I need some of
photos
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the photos
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 that you and me
together with
 some natural
sceneries
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scenery
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at
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in
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 day time in
forest
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the forest
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 with wild animals and
also
 some
photos
in
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of
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park
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the park
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 with Rose flowers. I don’t have
the
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apply
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photos
you
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of you
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 and me together so I need to make
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a photo
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photo shop
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photoshop
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 to make the pictures at
most
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the most
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 remarkable moments in our life. And
also
, the place looks
every
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very
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 beautiful now I
collecting
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collect
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 my
photos
 to make the photo dairy. I hope you can send me the
photos
 waiting to see
it
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them
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 thanks Best Regards Arun
Submitted by arunramrvs on

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